Edges of fluffy clouds are tinted pink
As Sun sets and Portulacca folds its lips.
Taking Nature’s cue, I slow down my pace.
Go back home to the rhythm of my breath.
At dusk, In company of poetry
Sit on the brown parquet floor, earnestly
It has come from distant lands to reach me.
Would you believe, words too have wings?
'Before the music ends', melody stirs
The long forgotten notes of Jal Tarang.
Eyes closed, am spellbound by sheer elegance
Of images; right word in the right place.
Jal Tarang is an ancient musical instrument. Cups of varying sizes, made of bronze or porcelain are filled with water. The pitch is changed by adjusting the volume of water in the cup. The number of cups depends on the melody being played. Bowls are arranged in semi circle in front of the player so he can reach them easily. He softly hits the cup with a wooden stick on the border to get the sound. it require great skill to produce right notes.Jal means water and tarang i think waves of sound.
A fitting and adoring tribute to Sandra, Mamta...well composed...i liked the verses very much as I love and respect you both...thanks...10
Mamta, this is beautiful, a fitting tribute to Sandra, a fine poet and lady. Your words sang to me, they resonate still. Thank you for your explanation of the Jal Tarang. This is going into my favourites. Warm regards Bob 10+++
Mamtaji, Like Paarijat music of Jal Tarang The doyen’s praises are well sung Her poetic talent well penned Muse herself upon you descend. CP
Oh, glad I was able to visit your page and found this piece. This is a beautiful tribute to a nice and talented poet that I respect very much and my friend for many, many years. Your words are musical to my ears, I just love to sing this. Lovely piece.
One of the finest paths into which you have guided us To check in with you checker! Music muses... Wings Whisper. Known and unknown, all can get in and thrive with melody. Its your love for your Pal and the Pal Both occupy center Stage.
I read this in museindia. I wish to read this great piece again and again, for Sandra and for you Mamtaji. This poem is musical, tender and a true tribute to Sandra.
You are a true teacher, Mamta, from poetry to culture. A great tribute to Sandra. '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
yes.....words have wings and they take to wings and perch on the poet's creativity, , and hence we get such an exclusive poem, , , , thanx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'words too have wings'--->WOW! .....................................> jal tarang, - in bangla too use same words! A REMARKABLE PIECE! ! ! >>>>>>>SUPERB DICTION>>>>>GREAT POEM FOR GREAT SANDRA! Loved it................................ 10101010101010+