A Watery Wisdom Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

A Watery Wisdom

Rating: 3.7


Flows from the dead
to read new trace,
losing numerous shapes
yet its identity forever stays.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 13 June 2009

True, wisdom has no relation with life. The life is ever new and fresh to enjoy. CP

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simple nice.. you you. i started writing a poem called wisdom.. today.. interesting eh..

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Anjali Sinha 07 June 2009

its deep fathomless that watery wisdom -10 anjali

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 June 2009

nicely constructed a truth. shan

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 04 June 2009

deep....and beautiful. loved it. loses its shape...yes, but regains its form. thank you dost.

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Nice poem. From the soil, we have originated and to thus we will ultimately return. For nature is composed of the same core elements fundamental to all organisms. 'A watery wisdom' that seeps down into the Earth to be recycled. Fundamental priniciples. Lovely read.10+

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Mark Nwagwu 05 August 2009

deep, to read new trace. fluid woderful.

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Ritty Patnaik 28 July 2009

dear vaibhav, who inspires you to write such wonderful lines? i am amazed you write so well, with the wisdom of a seer.god bless you always. ritty

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

This has depth and a meaning which a few shall understand.may take a lifetime...keep em coming

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 June 2009

Vaibhav you could tell a lot in few words. But consider changing 'losing numerous shapes' to taking numerous shapes'. Just a freindly suggestion. But this is a very good theme u have dealt with so well.

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