Adam And Eve Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Adam And Eve

Rating: 5.0

To be blanketed by the shadows
Of our nakedness would be a joy
As it angers the g-ds for we are too young
To think this is right
But they are square-minded doing so
And forgot that our generation was
Before the holocaust of bombs and drones
We are the night, matured age
And the night will cover our sins
Until the dawn arrives to expel us

Tuesday, February 27, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: war and peace,bittersweet love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.J. Lemon 27 February 2024

Amazing, LeeAnn. Yes, there is no innocence in the garden seeded with bombs. A fantastic verse.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 February 2024

A poem of great depth. Great images!

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Richard Wlodarski 27 February 2024

Cohen would be proud. And so would Bruce Cockburn. Like a very fine aged wine, your writing continues to get better and better, LeeAnn!

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Anjandev Roy 27 February 2024

Wonderful...... just wonderful..... thanks... LeeAnn...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 February 2024

Later they found that Arch on the Ararat area. You created an amazing poem about the first existence of mankind.5 Stars full, I have enjoyed tremendously. Thank you so much for sharing

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 05 March 2024

Nice concept and presentation. God won't get anger for He has made us to function as Days and Nights only. Beautiful write

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Rob Lamberton 04 March 2024

To be naked without shame because are sins are covered in the darkness, a poem from the beginning!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 February 2024

We are the night, matured age And the night will cover our sins Until the dawn arrives to expel us.....appreciated

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Nosheen Irfan 29 February 2024

Wo this is awesome

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Nosheen Irfan 29 February 2024

Wo this is so literary. A sheer pleasure! So much poetic flair and depth. Top marks!

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