All Alone! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

All Alone!

Rating: 5.0


Walking alone on this lonely dark deserted path
I realised we are all alone
On the path of adversity
We have to carry our own light and a little faith
To come out of gloom and inadequacy.

All Alone!
Thursday, July 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,faith
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 July 2016

Path of adversity is amazing where on walking every person feels loneliness. In this little path of life we have to carry light of self awakening. Very interesting poem shared really. Nicely penned....10

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Kelly Kurt 07 July 2016

We are all alone in so many ways. To find our way through life, we all need our own light

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 July 2016

Hi Aarzoo, On the paths of adversities, everybody is alone; How true! And the roads are deserted, because nobody wants to recognize you in that stage; nobody comes near you, nobody speaks to you- You are so lonely. Only those who have gone through such malady can fathom the gloom, the deserted feelings. Yes, We have to carry our own light and a little faith to come out of the gloom and inadequacy. Truly reflecting the teachings of Bhagavat Gita: Let a man lift himself by his own self alone and let him not lower himself. For, this self alone is the friend of oneself and this self alone is his enemy (Translation by Swami Chinmayananda) . A poem of great insight and immense hope and faith from the gifted poet. Loved reading. Enjoyed. A ten is far less than what you deserve for this beautiful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2021

I sincerely appreciate the spirit of this poem. We have come to this earth alone and we will depart this transient world in the identical fashion. Nobody will accompany your soul in its travel. A great short work.

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Valsa George 11 July 2016

You have summarized the universal truth......! Basically we are all alone! If we carry a little light, we won't be left in darkness! Pithy...... and true!

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

I would like to extend it further why only adversity in everything we are alone....In happy moments, in sad in adversity, in pain, in sorrow, in joy in ups and in downs we are all alone...It is only you who go through them, the people around, standing and supporting, giving moral supports and encouragements, they are spice of life not the life itself. They say that they share same feelings but it is you alone who go thru them not they. We are all alone in every walks of our life..A thought provoking poem..10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2016

On the path of adversity! ! But. WITH HOPE. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 08 July 2016

A lot said in a few lines. I totally agree with you Aarzoo. You have put it so beautifully. I'm absolutely impressed. Very inspirational write.10 with all my heart.

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