Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 26 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

American Gothic - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

(dedicated to Kim Schilling, a poet friend)

wild
tense
exotic
anguish

castle
almost ruin
ghosts
mysterious

secrets
gr uesome
characters
specific setting

a girl
clever
escape
faith's power

soul
fear
deepest
unconscio us

first
American
professional
au thor

four
horror
novels
in two years

Ormond
Wieland
Arthur Mervyn
Edgar Huntley

a pioneer to
Edgar Allan Poe
Herman Melville
Nathaniel Hawthorne

(inspired by Charles Brockden Brown's novels)


Comments about American Gothic by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • (2/10/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    Your styling is great, its different and thats why i like it, you're a poet my friend.

    Keep creating that voice

    Best wishes

    Jon
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  • (11/3/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    I like it alot. its very unique (Report)Reply

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  • (9/10/2008 10:47:00 AM)

    Again, your style is unusual, and takes getting used to. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/1/2008 6:43:00 PM)

    I am not familiar with all of these people and so cannot appreciate every thing that is said and I haven’t yet caught on to all the meanings intended: ex.,

    a girl
    clever
    escape
    faith's power

    I will have to do more reading I see.
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  • (8/30/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    Hey, this it is a good one, i like the way how you wrote it and the use of those few words, you did a lot with them....great..... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2008 9:13:00 AM)

    This is a good one, i like your choice of words. Keep on writing! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2008 8:56:00 AM)

    very good writing. I like this poem alot. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2008 8:47:00 AM)

    very well done.keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/30/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    ...a different style of expression....I enjoyed it......10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2008 5:41:00 AM)

    Nice poem, I like the dark, melancholic synomyms used in this poem to describe the gothic subculture. Lovely. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2008 5:40:00 AM)

    Spare, elegant definations. A very informative write. Take care.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra
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  • (8/30/2008 1:49:00 AM)

    america is the world pal, but world not america, bosen idup disana, indonesia and liverpool england is my better place, please comment my latest poems oh me (Report)Reply

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  • Ric Bastasa (8/28/2008 5:45:00 AM)

    i can feel a very poetic trail.. wonderful ahmad (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2008 4:02:00 AM)

    Very interesting, thankyou for sharing your work with us! :) (Report)Reply

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  • (8/26/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    Ahmad, thank you for asking me to read your words. I like the shortened style of this poem. I shall read more poems now...My best to you, Carol (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 10:50:00 AM)

    I like this one, its a little strange but its good (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 10:50:00 AM)

    I like this one, its a little strange but its good (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 15, 2009


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