An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
I saw her cold and I was alerted,
from my shoulders to hers, I nudged my jacket.
At her boarding house I left her be,
and I tiptoed across the street.
I turned my back to catch her greeting
she sent me in her hand waving.
I passed a building and so a field,
a content feeling suddenly built.
I tripped along the way alone,
it had been half a distance home.
I rose my head to look at the cloud,
at the beautiful canvas I wanted to applaud
and an evening walk I took in delight,
whilst the day rested in twilight..
Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work! Caroline
yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem...
Wowwwww, , this is very cool... I felt very calm when I read this one, , , Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , , I like it, , , (^_^) v Naru Kaede
An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy
Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++
Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good poem indeed