An Evening Walk Poem by kite remedy

An Evening Walk

Rating: 3.3


An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
I saw her cold and I was alerted,
from my shoulders to hers, I nudged my jacket.
At her boarding house I left her be,
and I tiptoed across the street.
I turned my back to catch her greeting
she sent me in her hand waving.
I passed a building and so a field,
a content feeling suddenly built.
I tripped along the way alone,
it had been half a distance home.
I rose my head to look at the cloud,
at the beautiful canvas I wanted to applaud
and an evening walk I took in delight,
whilst the day rested in twilight..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin Jeffery 07 December 2008

Very good poem indeed

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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008

Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work! Caroline

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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem...

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Naru Kaede 04 December 2008

Wowwwww, , this is very cool... I felt very calm when I read this one, , , Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , , I like it, , , (^_^) v Naru Kaede

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Joseph Poewhit 04 December 2008

Poem paints a nice picture

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Raj Nandy 14 January 2009

An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy

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Aiswarya. T.anish 14 December 2008

Really Nice poem..I liked it a lot

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++

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Colin Jeffery 10 December 2008

A poem that offers much

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!

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