.. ≫ *my First Cut****(Dark Poem by Eyan Desir

.. ≫ *my First Cut****(Dark

Rating: 3.1

Like a virgin to love
I felt a miracle for the first time
As your presence touched my life
You gave my heart joy it never had
And opened my eyes to a new light
Not knowing love isn't just a pretty face
But what that's lock in a heart
I fell as the victim to a lie
False promise of sweet love
Streams of pain! I now bleed
Many years my heart wasn't red.

thanks for reading

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire.
June 26th 2009

Saadat Tahir 04 July 2009

sometimes the talk of love puritya nd true love appear to me to, be archaic and effervescent terms....everyo9ne has his own interpretation and spin....yet i feel a unified definition may be ever elusive...yet a very nice portrayal...i liked it cheers

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 July 2009

Excellent sir.... I like it.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 04 July 2009

I'm impressed, you say too much in a few words; it's absolute simplicity along with great complexity. Your idea is too deep but expressed very well. I love your choice of words. Brilliant

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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

Well and artistically expressed emotions! I enjoyed it.-)

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Catrina Heart 04 July 2009

A nice poem written. Well expressed thoughts!

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this is... undescribable. it really made me think. i'm kinda speechless. love, Heart of Ice

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Nooruddeen Mm 03 October 2009

Nice one Touching Rgds Nooruddeen

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 July 2009

touching.... first cut of the heart.. first love...first heartbreak... nicely written, my friend.. lovelots, Maia

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see......... sorry. but, life eh? ? choose virtue.....

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Stefan Van Pinxteren 07 July 2009

Very good poem I understood it right away. I think I reaily felt what you wrote.

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