I'd write a long ode
to delishis hot coffee
and admitt, I'm even willing
but I've no yurning
fer a burning
and have trubble with my spilling.
Your poems remind me of the poetry of Ogden Nash. Always fresh, hot and stout. Barb
Funny and true, well done. Maybe the phantom PH 'p' can helpp you if you dropp anything. Hugs Anna xxx
I kind of like hot coffee, but I prefer it white, white and hot and frothy with choccy bits to bite. I kind of like your poem in fact it's very good I'll come and read another you've got me in the mood. Ruthy: -)
Hey, Chuck! I'm not sure that 'spilling' is mispilled or not. LOL Very cute piece. At the moment, I have a cup of coffee and have recently exited my online dictionary. I don't think I could do without either one. Have a wonderful evening! Beth
It must be the environment; try writing at Decafe where the writng ca-fiend awaits to granu-latte your unspiration, drip, by drip until you perk up and write.
Came to read this poem expecting a senti ode..but that was so kool & funny. Preets
Chuck, I had a hoot at this one! Way to go...I fill so much batter about my spilling misteaks now! ! See Scarlett...a kindred spirit! ! Really cute poem Chuck. I might not know much, (comma) but I know I likes what I sees! ! Hugs, Dee
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How many times have you burned yourself with coffee at the keyboard? ! U R not alone! Cute (how did I miss this one?) and overflowing with fun! : ] Est P.S. Is THIS your 100th? I counted back; not sure. CONGRATULATIONS either way! ! !