You sprinkle yourself inside me
With every comment,
With every intercourse of feeling
With every giggle you pull from me.
You make me love myself,
Because I see myself in you.
If you don't desire me,
If I never make your hands shake,
When I'm close,
Really close....
Then it's time now
To step back
And save my heart
Like a hero.
I'll let you sleep on it.
© 2012
Then it's time now To step back And save my heart Like a hero. That's my favorite line. But captivating throughout. Excellent ending. I want a sequel! lol Thanks for sharing.
Well Miss Honeytip-this is one of my first introductions to your poetry and I love it. I love your signature endings-they are like a shock back to reality after getting lost in your thoughts. You are fabulous! Favourite line: You make me love myself, Because I see myself in you. Btw thanks Stevie for the recommendation in poetic form :) you were right, she's great.
This is another brilliant poem! Extremely well done! Gosh if he wasn't sure before, he will be after reading this!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent Ruby and I know the song well. I'll give you the answer in the morning...