And What's It Gonna Be Boy? Poem by Ruby Honeytip

And What's It Gonna Be Boy?

Rating: 4.8


You sprinkle yourself inside me
With every comment,
With every intercourse of feeling
With every giggle you pull from me.
You make me love myself,
Because I see myself in you.
If you don't desire me,
If I never make your hands shake,
When I'm close,
Really close....
Then it's time now
To step back
And save my heart
Like a hero.

I'll let you sleep on it.

© 2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 11 November 2012

Inspired by an old Meatloaf song: -)

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Alla Simone 03 December 2012

Then it's time now To step back And save my heart Like a hero. That's my favorite line. But captivating throughout. Excellent ending. I want a sequel! lol Thanks for sharing.

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Aria Siren 28 November 2012

Well Miss Honeytip-this is one of my first introductions to your poetry and I love it. I love your signature endings-they are like a shock back to reality after getting lost in your thoughts. You are fabulous! Favourite line: You make me love myself, Because I see myself in you. Btw thanks Stevie for the recommendation in poetic form :) you were right, she's great.

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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012

This is another brilliant poem! Extremely well done! Gosh if he wasn't sure before, he will be after reading this!

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Red O'mara 12 November 2012

Lots of emotions there, Ruby. Stirring poem.

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Lyn Paul 11 November 2012

Excellent Ruby and I know the song well. I'll give you the answer in the morning...

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