Watching a huge elephant
Walking down the roadside,
With brick red glow of sunlight,
Is, indeed, an awesome sight,
A symbol of nature's stupendous creation!
The trees stand to salute the colossal wonder,
The birds flock to tweet this titanic marvel,
The mountains stand challenged with astonishment,
The wind blows aside, adrift with amazement,
And the sky bows down with utter bewilderment!
Quintain / Quintet
This colossus is indeed an extraordinary creature! Well written poem!
An elephant is always an animal of wider. There is hardly anybody who doesn't steal a moment to watch a majestic elephant
Love Richard Wlodarski's comment too! .. The Awe of God's creation! .. Miracles they are for all to ponder on! ..
Marvelous poem! .. Filled with such beauty, wonder and awe! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
Oh, I've always felt such a wonderous beauty the elephants hold! .. A simply
Excellent tribute to one of God's great creatures. The last line is priceless.
A glorious tribute to one of the true wonders of nature....great verse, Geeta.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And your words are beautiful. Indeed life seems so giant and mesmerizing when we receive it with hopefulness and happiness. I loved the beautiful picture and the positivity in your poem