Anniversary Day Of Submitting Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Anniversary Day Of Submitting

Rating: 3.7


I

came

found grove

words there were

I was expression

dated fifteenth January

in two thousand eighteen with numerous starry souls

crossing seven seas and thirteen rivers the paths told me- ‘no end this eternity'

incomprehensible I'm, understood this is earthly life, those who floats life boat once in this stream it continues only endless towards



-January 15,2019 Chattogram

Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,self,writings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
15th January,2018 was the day of my first appearance on this literary web site and by this writing I'm celebrating my 1st anniversary day of submitting


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravinder Soni 16 January 2019

Mahtab, maine Urdu mein kahe Qata Taarikh zarroor padhe hain, angrezi mein pahali baar.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Congratulation for completing first successful year with us. Indeed you added value to this PH site with your fantastic poems. Keep writing for ever and ever, with all my best wishes.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2019

With poetic expression you have found love and this love has motivated you to write. An excellent poem is shared.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2019

Crossing seven seas! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2019

A nice poem to celebrate the anniversary of submitting poems. Liked its style.

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Pallab Chaudhury 29 January 2019

Nicely elevated 'I' up above the base line.... Stay blessed.... PC

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 January 2019

Congrats for the anniversary of submitting your poems, with a nice poem like this.

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Muzahidul Reza 25 January 2019

With fantastic attraction I see, this one you have done Thanks for sharing For expressing this meaning, .....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 January 2019

Congratulations, Mahtab on your first anniversary in this powerful poetry site. You have submitted powerful and beautiful poems. Poem Hunter is blessed by your presence. A remarkable poem well crafted.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 January 2019

congratulashones happppeeee celeeebrashones for all ur lovoleeee compooosseeeshones MB BECOME MBA SOONLY \OF SHININGLY POEETREE

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