saadat tahir

Gold Star - 5,479 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Anotherdawn … 21012k14 - Poem by saadat tahir

Silent the night set free by light
as glowing day shreds the gloom

Lift a hand to touch the morn
enjoy the feel of buds in bloom

up and down the splashing colors
frolic, dally, pan and zoom

dewy strands in a cropped lawn
whisper coming of another dawn

playful petals cavort and swan
to hold on secrets in their wombs

flutter leaves on dancing twines
loiter, linger with merry plumes

languid days meander on ways
splash colors and dance perfumes

carmine violet, dangling blue
smile, sashay to pay their due

Poet's Notes about The Poem

... birth days....come and go....!


saadat tahir
21st Jan,2k14

Comments about Anotherdawn … 21012k14 by saadat tahir

  • V P Mahur (4/7/2014 2:10:00 PM)

    Dear Tahir,
    Nice feel of nature. I like nature poems. And u can find many of them on my page.
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  • Soulful Heart (3/14/2014 2:05:00 AM)

    a vivid morn of hope and beautiful as always... (Report) Reply

  • (2/28/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    i loved your last stanza..very very well written i invite you to comment on my poems also.have a look hope you'll enjoy them (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (2/25/2014 12:52:00 PM)

    Freshening! ! !
    @ Yasmeen Khan: truly said! a beautiful scene captured in words!
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  • Noreen Carden (2/20/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Really lovely poem with lots of colour and rhyme beautifully written and lovely to read (Report) Reply

  • Elias Uddin (2/15/2014 1:51:00 AM)

    nice portrayal............................... (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (1/24/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    What a delightful scene you have painted! There are dancing flowers, splashing colours, and pearly strands of dew.The verse is full of optimism and hope. May you see many more dawns like this one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 24, 2014

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