Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 138,131 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Are You The Same Angel Who Burnt His Wings (A Tribute To Kumarmani Mahakul) - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Neither books of sciences nor tomes of arts,
the greatest writes are the writes of hearts,
how nice is the man whose pen, and paper and the ink,
is the wine of love, divine, aromatic and pink,
drunk in love I see your letters have painted something,
on the canvas of my heart I see an Angel's painting!
Oh Poet of Love! Your poem is a song now everyone sings,
Are you the same Angel who burnt his wings!

(Being inspired by Kumarmani Mahakul's poem Writing In Your Heart)

Topic(s) of this poem: angel

Comments about Are You The Same Angel Who Burnt His Wings (A Tribute To Kumarmani Mahakul) by Akhtar Jawad

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/30/2015 5:22:00 PM)

    You are too great dear poet to gift selflessly your marvelous works to this poetic community. We feel each other and life is well reflected in life. This poem is definitely an excellent composition and a monumental art of writes of heart. Divine aromatic pink love is reflected in each line. You have perfectly touched the excellence of literary ability. Again you have delighted me with your nice poetic gift and I am very much thankful and grateful to you. May Allah bring lots of happiness for you and your family and all poets and readers who have read this and written their feedback. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/30/2015 12:33:00 PM)

    Excellent tribute to our senior poet with heart of a nature lover..........May God bless him with health, wealth and writing poweress...........Aamin. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (11/30/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    Read your poem first on Kumarmani's site. Such lovely tribute from one poet of heart to other. The freshest writers are the writers of heart. They capture all hearts. Thank you Akhtarji for such lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/29/2015 11:43:00 PM)

    A great tribute to a sweet person who scripts great messages of love and life and whose poems are full of great thoughts about God! A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/29/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Kumarmani is a dear friend and a delightful poet. Thank you for this tribute to him. (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/29/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    your inspirational poem is a wonderful poem with nice images, a well composed poem, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 29, 2015

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