Arrow Of Death Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Arrow Of Death

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feel insecure
in every blink
of eyes
of sunrises

though has
guards, troops
though has
forts that around

arrow of death
never misses
it throbs heart
it cuts soul down

it can’t be safety
with no right path
will vessel sail
on dry ocean?

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Chad Robinson)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Carlos Abeti 15 May 2009

nicely written, well expresed, meaningful just another good one

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 May 2009

Will vessel sail on dry ocean? No, not all. Where there is birth, there is death too.

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

nice poem u clarify it very well

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Ruerd Visser 15 May 2009

Oncemore you share your unique style with the world! Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Delicate Heart 15 May 2009

so influential poem as to affect the reader profoundly whilst reading it.

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a fine write on the unavaoidable.

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Indira Babbellapati 25 May 2009

arrow of death never misses it throbs heart it cuts soul down shows ur philosophical insights...

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Subbaraman N V 25 May 2009

Yes; arrow of death pierces the people as destined! Let us hurry to do good things to the society before the arrow kisses us!

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Juan Carlos Abeti 23 May 2009

good one no matter what you write about, always is good to read your work

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Omar Ibrahim 21 May 2009

you are right! wonderful touching words..........(wont you dedicate a poem to me? ?) hehe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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