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At The Edge Of Heaven

Rating: 5.0

Like an ocean wind
It flows into yr eyes
And stings them with the salty air
You can't get away
Because yr legs are frozen deep
To the shore
But you need to carry on
As the heavens are opening
And waiting for you are
Everyone you have ever loved

Step by step, on the stairway to bliss
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Tuesday, June 22, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven,ocean
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2021

Such a marvelous poem! Thanks for sharing.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 June 2021

Lovely, joyous description of the pure bliss awaiting on the verge of heaven. So much enjoyed.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 June 2021

Wow a lovely poem, i like the sea salty stanza and mention of heaven. Kudos for fab poem! ! !

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Lasaad Tayeb 24 June 2021

Stunning write that deserve top stars, please take a look at my page, Thanks

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Brilliant Poem that deserves top marks

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Step by step - at the edge of heaven - waiting for salvation.....Profound truth of life

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Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

Amazing work!

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M Asim Nehal 24 June 2021

Amusing. To sum-up in one word. Entire life's philosophy to reach heavens so well written. ***********

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Kevin Patrick 23 June 2021

Captivating and ethereal, there is a sadness but a warmth, the final wave of death carries us into that ocean of eternity. Beautiful work LeeAnn

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Anjandev Roy 22 June 2021

But you need to carry on.....significant..

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