Like an ocean wind
It flows into yr eyes
And stings them with the salty air
You can't get away
Because yr legs are frozen deep
To the shore
But you need to carry on
As the heavens are opening
And waiting for you are
Everyone you have ever loved
Step by step, on the stairway to bliss
You are welcomed
Now, you can have yr final rest
Captivating and ethereal, there is a sadness but a warmth, the final wave of death carries us into that ocean of eternity. Beautiful work LeeAnn
Amusing. To sum-up in one word. Entire life's philosophy to reach heavens so well written. ***********
Lovely, joyous description of the pure bliss awaiting on the verge of heaven. So much enjoyed.
Wow a lovely poem, i like the sea salty stanza and mention of heaven. Kudos for fab poem! ! !
Stunning write that deserve top stars, please take a look at my page, Thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Eerie poem, dear! But well worded, that is sure. Bravo!