Auburn Curls With Goldilocks…2904-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Auburn Curls With Goldilocks…2904-2k12

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Baking days and desolate nights
Well enshrined from far off lights
By daunting minarets high above
Scarce the flutter of a passing dove
Raging storms that rise to heights
Promises engulf in lasting blights
Alien lands stretch all around
How far away life's muffled sound

Amid sandy land and strewn rocks
Lies Auburn curls with lil' Goldilocks

Adorned in shards and twisted steel
By contorted circle of a rides wheel
Got with useless shekel's, pounds
Soaked and ruddy distant mounds
Never a murmur shall escape
From a treacherous landscape
Lie both together clipped wing
Like in life never to ask a thing

Amid sandy land and strewn rocks
Lies Auburn curls with lil' Goldilocks

All they knew was care and give
for else to love and solemnly live
yanked by fate for heaven's delight
angel's abode and nameless sight
the best aloft in earnest leave
sprouting soaked hearts sieve
left behind in sobs and heave
streaming tears, eternal grieve

Amid sandy stretch of strewn rocks
Lies Auburn curls with lil' Goldilocks

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29 April-2k12
Islamabad

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On my recent devastating loss in far off deserts...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dyah Kristiyanti 20 May 2012

how I could feel the pain and your grief I've never really lost the person I love but I have several times in despair and fear fear of losing people I love my heart feels squeezed, kneaded, was gripped by it whatever you feel but at least you get up again and you can share your resurrection your strength and your rigidity for people in need when they experience it like you

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Captain Cur 17 May 2012

A solemn poem about loss and resignation, beautifully written. One that I will remember.

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Idris Elasha 13 May 2012

A poem about loss that we gain a nice poem.That's life.

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Valerie Dohren 08 May 2012

An incredibly emotive and beautiful poem, so sad that it has arisen out of your despair. So sorry for your loss and may you find peace of mind in the fullness of time.

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Unwritten Soul 04 May 2012

Always feel sad every time i read this, i always adore your spirit and strong heart..even u not realize it but that it actually exist and it is your precious thing that you ever posses inside.Be happy and my prayers for you always_Unwritten Soul

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Sania Bashir 12 August 2012

thnk'Q fr sharing ur poem... verily it's a grief...n I pray 4 u too...just keep thanking ALMIGHTY ALLAH fr every thing

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Roong S 15 July 2012

Oh this is such a sad poem...I pray for you

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

I must have read this poem 20 times, and can feel your pain.

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Meena Mustafa 29 June 2012

OMG! I am speechless.... this poem made me cry.An incredibly emotive poem! May God bless you.

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Rebecca Egbert 17 June 2012

This is beautiful, so sad too. The picture you painted for me is nothing short of amazing from this poem! I might have to use this poem to paint you the picture of my mind's eye then send it to you as a gift. If I every find time to paint!

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