Battleships = Love (C) 8-22-09 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Battleships = Love (C) 8-22-09

Rating: 4.1


At a young age its not easy or for us to find the perfect lover. I say we’re in the battle ships stage, see true love has a hit and miss process but once you get all the correct coordinates. Your heart will sink into yours lover’s sea of love. ~ Xeniyah

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crystal Hayes 25 September 2009

i completely agree with this saying.. great arrangement of words!

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Obinna Eruchie 24 September 2009

An interesting of looking at targeting the right love. Adorable.

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Mubeen Sadhika 18 September 2009

Cute lil beauty there. remarkable expressions.

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Louis Rams 04 September 2009

a very good way of looking at it. i'm glad you got the correct coordinates, for that bullseye of love. a ten

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Dani Moore 28 August 2009

i have never thought of it like it but its so true great job keep them coming

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Marisa Harmony 05 June 2010

It fascinates me how you can have such a perfect perspective on things, and put them in words. I agree with this poem, it's truth.

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Richelle Barrameda 24 May 2010

I like how you compare love with a battleship, it's possible and the finished product is great.10+

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Bethany Williams 24 May 2010

Looks like you are trying to find your true love. Great poem

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Anonymous Heart 28 February 2010

I love this poem, and the words you picked. It's so true.

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 26 September 2009

I love this.... Its perfect....great choice of words never stop writing^^

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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