At a young age its not easy or for us to find the perfect lover. I say we’re in the battle ships stage, see true love has a hit and miss process but once you get all the correct coordinates. Your heart will sink into yours lover’s sea of love. ~ Xeniyah
An interesting of looking at targeting the right love. Adorable.
a very good way of looking at it. i'm glad you got the correct coordinates, for that bullseye of love. a ten
i have never thought of it like it but its so true great job keep them coming
It fascinates me how you can have such a perfect perspective on things, and put them in words. I agree with this poem, it's truth.
I like how you compare love with a battleship, it's possible and the finished product is great.10+
I love this poem, and the words you picked. It's so true.
I love this.... Its perfect....great choice of words never stop writing^^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i completely agree with this saying.. great arrangement of words!