Aisha Sherazi

Rookie (London, UK)

Bickering About The Bathroom - Poem by Aisha Sherazi

There’s scum, filth,
Under the rim,
It has to be cleaned,
It’s looking quite grim.

There’s dirt, grime,
Around the sink,
It has to be wiped,
For it’s causing a stink.

There’s muck, dust,
Near the tub,
The floor isn’t clean,
It needs a good scrub.

But it will get done,
All in good time,
Just give me a chance,
It isn’t a crime.

You are not perfect,
Not perfect at all,
The bed isn’t made,
I said nothing at all.

So give me some time,
Give me some peace,
For the germs in my bathroom,
Are having a feast!


Comments about Bickering About The Bathroom by Aisha Sherazi

  • (1/24/2007 5:15:00 PM)


    Aisha, this comes as close to Universal as any poem I've seen. But perhaps that's just me. I am looking for a commercial product which will clean the bathroom - similar to a hand-grenade, but not apt to chip tile or porcelain. Cheers for this one. - Will (Report) Reply

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  • Brian Dorn (7/6/2006 10:29:00 AM)


    Who's got time to clean the bathroom when there's poetry to write? Cute poem, Aisha!
    Brian
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  • (7/3/2006 4:12:00 PM)


    as you know I love rhymes. they are so hard to get, -ones that still sound natural. you have a gift for them and a playful way of choosing your subjects! Tim (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2006 1:51:00 AM)


    Aisha that is teh story in every house ~

    Loved the ending..yeah let the germs feast ~

    Preets
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  • (5/14/2006 4:53:00 AM)


    Lets all slow down, come out the house and smell the roses for a while,
    A fun write
    Love Duncan
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  • (5/11/2006 3:20:00 AM)


    Sounds almost like my house, too, Aisha. If I close my eyes and hold my nose, maybe I can pretend it isn't there, and get some of your peace and quiet...

    Love, Fran xx
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  • Lizzy Tomlinson (5/6/2006 4:47:00 PM)


    Right up my street this one. I'd be cleaning constantly if it was left to my lot. (10) . Lizzy.x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, March 27, 2006


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