Birthing Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Birthing

Rating: 5.0


The day births in tender tones of golden,
soaking up the tears of darkness
Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight,
measuring the limitless space
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There's still a lot to know,
a lot to explore
Life didn't end when your heart broke.

Saturday, February 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2018

Measuring the limitless space! ! And to embrace the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 12 February 2018

So true! Life does not end with heartbreak. There's still a lot to learn and time to grow.

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Seamus O Brian 14 February 2018

The concept of morning is woven into all of our hopes and anticipations regarding a better future than what we face now. You have succinctly and vividly captured that hope in the lines of this piece, and released it as encouragement to your readers. Thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 15 February 2018

Rising from darkness to a new day, new hope- - -the spirit is so nicely woven in this short and lovely poem. The day births in tender tones of golden, soaking up the tears of darkness Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight, measuring the limitless space

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

It is a gorgeous poem on dawn with hope having groovy collocation. I quote... There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 June 2018

Hi Nosheen, Marvellous poem. Don't just open your eyes Rise like a bird in flight... Yes, soar on your wings, that would take you to new heights., new skies. For, There's there's still a lot to know lot to explore.... And of course, The world didn't end when your heart broke. The positive energy you, your poem exude! Wonderful. Loved reading this. A 10 and onto my poem list. Thank you.

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Your optimism is infectious. Short, beautiful poem of hope. (10)

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Susan Williams 07 May 2018

Thank you for writing this and thank God I read it today. Don't just open your eyes, but rise like a bird in flight, / measuring the limitless space / There's still a lot to know, / a lot to explore I will try to believe that, my dear friend, since it comes straight from your gentle heart. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list

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Hans Vr 26 April 2018

Wonderful and very inspiring poem. So true and so touching.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 April 2018

There's still a lot to know, a lot to explore Life didn't end when your heart broke. It's a broken heart that is capable of performing the miracles, thoughtful and beautiful.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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