Broken Poem by Whispering Rose


Rating: 4.5

I had from the start
Carried a broken heart
One which endured all grief
And always found a way to forgive
It’s been long this way
That I couldn’t take it anymore
I decided I should find some way
To bring my heart together as before
The process was exhausting and long
But I had to stay strong
I thought I was alone
But many hands were reached to help
My heart was fixed, not healed
I realized my heart was made of glass
It can be fixed but never to be the same

Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 05 February 2010

Well described emotions.. A broken heart has its own beauty..i love mine. :)

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 06 February 2010

We all have broken hearts in one way or another. That's why it is so easy to love people, we can all relate to each other. Keep writing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 February 2010

Things once broken once can never be the same so is a heart, but broken heart is very near and dear to God. May God heal your heart!

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A broken heart is often the birth place of greatness.

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Bert Bell 14 October 2010

Whispering Rose, you have such a lovely, honest way of expressing emotion in your poems. You write lines that penetrate one's heart like- My heart was fixed, not healed I realized my heart was made of glass It can be fixed but never to be the same Very moving words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

It's been long this way; but, life goes on. Nice work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 June 2011

nice write.the way you have managed your heart is praiseworthy.expressed intelligently.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 April 2011

i fell inlove with your last two lines-i don't know but i feel like crying, i think you nailed it all, you got as i awe i like the words.

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 20 February 2011

It says so much in such less time. Wonderful way of expressing.

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Wildan F Rabbani 06 January 2011

I like your poem mostly the last line you told the readers that heart is a precious so everyone may not break any heart sorry, my English is bad :)

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