Whispering Rose

Rookie - 0 Points (14/10/1990 / Algeria)

Broken - Poem by Whispering Rose

I had from the start
Carried a broken heart
One which endured all grief
And always found a way to forgive
It’s been long this way
That I couldn’t take it anymore
I decided I should find some way
To bring my heart together as before
The process was exhausting and long
But I had to stay strong
I thought I was alone
But many hands were reached to help
My heart was fixed, not healed
I realized my heart was made of glass
It can be fixed but never to be the same

Comments about Broken by Whispering Rose

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/15/2015 4:50:00 AM)

    It's been long this way; but, life goes on. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/15/2011 6:35:00 AM)

    nice write.the way you have managed your heart is praiseworthy.expressed intelligently. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (4/17/2011 7:07:00 AM)

    i fell inlove with your last two lines-i don't know but i feel like crying,
    i think you nailed it all, you got as i awe
    i like the words.
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  • (2/20/2011 11:50:00 AM)

    It says so much in such less time. Wonderful way of expressing. (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2011 12:11:00 AM)

    I like your poem mostly the last line
    you told the readers that heart is a precious
    so everyone may not break any heart

    sorry, my English is bad :)
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  • (10/31/2010 11:03:00 PM)

    Nicely written. You are so honest in the words you write. A heart can be healed but, never fixed we can only hope we become stronger. Really liked this poem 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Bert Bell (10/14/2010 8:54:00 PM)

    Whispering Rose, you have such a lovely, honest way of expressing emotion in your poems. You write lines that penetrate one's heart like-

    My heart was fixed, not healed
    I realized my heart was made of glass
    It can be fixed but never to be the same

    Very moving words.
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/28/2010 4:58:00 AM)

    A broken heart is often the birth place of greatness. (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/8/2010 8:49:00 AM)

    Things once broken once can never be the same so is a heart, but broken heart is very near and dear to God. May God heal your heart! (Report) Reply

  • Nathaniel Flying Owl (2/6/2010 12:34:00 PM)

    We all have broken hearts in one way or another. That's why it is so easy to love people, we can all relate to each other. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 9:20:00 AM)

    Well described emotions.. A broken heart has its own beauty..i love mine. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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