Broken Dreams Comments
Oh, if I had a star to shine
For every broken dream of mine
The whole night sky would turn to day
And all my troubles melt away....
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This is a very well written poem, lil Gal, and I liked how consistent your rhyming in it was. You certainly have a talent for poetic expression and displayed it quite well in this charming poem. Carl.
gud poem.............. i like this poem........ bht achi likhi hai....
a poem with passionate feelings of love.........sebastine
this is a beautiful poem! ...the ways you have described this love you have is sooooo well penned! ...a perfectionnist! ...keep wrting such beautiful pieces more...i would love to see them.. merry Xmas and a happy new year! NIA RIZ
you have well defined a women in love. Tender feelings, some hesitation, shyness, , all together in a very beautiful poem.
broken dreams...........nice sad love poem......well penned.......
The person who's ur inspiration can be felt forever, be they with u or not. Its a challange which a few stand to accept and prove. Your poem tells about the seed in you. Now this lil girl has to grow into a full bloomed tree. You have a long way to go Superb writing.
nicely written with extreme passion... i'm sorry for wat ur goin thorugh... wats meant to be will happen. don't lose faith. xoxo~paris~xoxo
poignant and beautiful poem..nicely written..lovely...10 Ency Bearis
a very beautiful write indeed with a very good use of metaphors and opposites, and lots of yearns for the lost one....i like it thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
A nice poem indeed, , i loved reading it, , , the idea is too good and streight comming from a broken heart, , lil gal i give u many many grades for it and unfortunately there are only 10 here, , also check my poem ' broken promises', , ,
let broken dreams broke broken memories. you may find a great of love someday.
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12/5/2025 2:35:01 PM # 1.0.0
A poem with focussed mind :) A sweet first stanza........ dreamy atmosphere of sadness. 'You'll love me for a little while Then you'll set me free again' it seems you believed in the opinion that in love... no freedom! and again there is a heart felt piece.... 'You've got my heart held on a string. Its breaking right in two. Enough belongs to me -to hurt- The rest belongs to you' ..... and its end is also very nice, though it is a poem of sorrow but i feel it something very sweet! just TOUCHY! !