When I close my eyes
She smiles with her eyes
Her soft tone pats me
And I hear those words
Which she never told me
When I open my eyes
Tears rundown my cheeks
To wet my beating heart
With salt to dilate pain
To breakdown my heart
My heart dried it all
In shelter of dark pal
Staying alone in four walls
In memories of her calls
Which I always recall
She left behind a mark
It’s a painful remark
It makes my dreams dark
With its sleepless nights
I stay awake for long
She moved away too long
To hear my broken song
So I walked on path long
To sing my broken song
To touch many distance long
it should disappear..this sad melancholy...may be she din't deserve you...love hurts
I totally thing that the pain will slowly go away, very well written poem! ! ! ! !
how sad! looks very natural. you have a style man a 10+++ from me surya
I guess this is not your personal love...just an imagery....with touching sorrow...a sad poem indeed
sad and almost spoken in a hushed pain very tender...i wonder what inspired this piece nice poetry cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
broken song a real melancholy a solitude ......... best write...........