Broken Up With Poem by Tareq Jalabi
Broken Up With
My life has ended two days ago
when you allowed your heart to someone else go
what a fool i am, i still love you although
you`ve left me without thinking what you me owe
i lived in the dream world that has no flaw
while considered reality my major foe
death counts anxiously minutes by exact
every minute that passes reminds me with the fact
that with the passage of time past becomes more past
and that enlightens your leaving`s impact
all my feelings i have just packed
because i am going where love does not last
it seem that iam not the only one who's in love lol but i really like it, keep it up
i love the last line! 'gone to a place where love does not go' it's simply beautiful.: ]
because i am going where love does not last? -> please let me know if you ever find that place...
Very good, you picked the right words that describe your silent despair... Are you cold blooded? I am.
ohhh, the pain, when with thunder comes rain. good write 10+
very sweet it's silent to me compared to your other poems but I really do like this one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:08:09 AM # 1.0.0
oh my goodness thats exactly how i feel right now! ! ! thats AMAZING! ! !