Butterfly 2 - An Admirable Feat Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Butterfly 2 - An Admirable Feat

Rating: 5.0


A butterfly so light,
Adorned with deep coloured wings,
Alights gently on little flowers,
Adheres to honey filled blossoms for a while,
And then, decides to tip toe on a pretty Deer,
Adjoining her jaw with pride, like
An adorable nose ring!
An admirable feat! Isn't it?

Butterfly 2 - An Admirable Feat
Saturday, June 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: amazing,animal,butterfly,insect,nature,nature love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A fine photo that inspired a poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 28 June 2020

Sweet thoughts... It is indeed a treat for eyes.

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Rajnish Manga 28 June 2020

You have very smartly captured the action of the butterfly and have created an outstanding portrait through this poem juxtaposed with the unique picture of a deer and the butterfly. Thanks, Geeta ji, for sharing the poem.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 28 June 2020

the {A} in each opening line is a form of poetic organism and habitat

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2020

Adjoining her jaw with pride, like An adorable nose ring! An admirable feat! Isn't it? ....... Much impressive. Wonderful imaginary really. The graphic attached to it is appreciated and attractive. Marvelous poem. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 July 2022

With such wonderful heart and feelings to this! .. Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 11 July 2022

Oh, So very precious! .. So beautifully worded! .. So beautifully expressed! ..

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Anjandev Roy 03 July 2020

Wonderful representation.........thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 01 July 2020

With beautiful plume That caught my serene globe Mesmerized by its beauty I just stood to admire. Beautiful poetry. Lived to flow with your thoughts.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 June 2020

Butterfly kisses the deer's nose, whispers dearly " I love your beauty"

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