Bri Edwards

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Called On The Rug... [limerick (Short, Of Course): Humor; Thanks To P H Member M. Asim Nehal] - Poem by Bri Edwards

A man called his wife for a hug.
“ I love you but there is a bug” …
came my wife’s reply.
And as much … I did try,
she would not lie with me on our rug!

Topic(s) of this poem: humor

Form: Limerick

Poet's Notes about The Poem

In: Limerick - 1 - Poem by M. Asim Nehal, the poet uses some of the same wording; actually, i stole some words from him. i hope he forgives me! ! ! of course i plan to share any monetary gain i get from my poem.......with him.

thank you, M. Asim Nehal!
bri :)

Comments about Called On The Rug... [limerick (Short, Of Course): Humor; Thanks To P H Member M. Asim Nehal] by Bri Edwards

  • (11/6/2015 12:04:00 PM)

    A great piece....But I'm not really clear. Does the bug belong to an entomologist, or in a From Russia with Love plot line? (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (11/3/2015 9:30:00 PM)

    Ha..... ha! Hug and bug do not go together! ! Either kill the bug or remove the rug! (Report) Reply

  • Eugene Levich (10/24/2015 10:23:00 AM)

    What's wrong with bugs? Is your wife a racist? (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2015 3:17:00 AM)

    Now that really sucks
    Maybe next time you'll have better luck
    Thanks Bri-10++
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  • Lyn Paul (10/23/2015 7:08:00 PM)

    Hey Bri. I am with your wife, the thought of a bug crawling would ruin the moment.
    But if you were super keen you could have had a quick clean.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015

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