with sea breeze
waves gently delight
a calling for exotic dreams
all this summer midnight
which was thousands miles distant
we had heard coral roar on silvery deep
amorous tunes are sang beautifully
and all happiness blessed this realm
dancing around the endless resonance
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Lynda Robson)
I thought this poem wae very peaceful.(My two brothers were commercial divers.)
i jsut had a drive along the beach...two distinct shades of gray-dark on the sea, light on the sky and a dazzling summer heat!
The lines themselves put a smile on my face... great work, sir! 10+++ MIMI
a beautiful write and best dedication to a poet........always sea breeze makes exotice dreams.......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very poetic. Instead of 'deep', 'depth'. Instead of 'sang', 'sung' (the past participle) . The last lines elevate the poem.