Christmaspoem Poem by ahmed khaled

Christmaspoem

Rating: 4.3


come to me, christ..
walking together..
on the rivers of sky..
on the light wings..
of loving angels..
on the compassionate wind..
dancing around hearts warmth..
on the peace, holding the sun..
to give all that beautiful..
and gracious light..
on the colours of those hearts..
willingly chose to be horizons..
and rainbows..
at the very moments..
of their sincere love..
on the sacred light..
that sun and stars..
have never known..
on the sound of swallows..
when they're humble..
passing by..
the scent of saint mary..
mixed with dew, dust..
and olive leaves..
in jerusalem..
come to me, christ..
to bless all humans..
by the heart's power..
by it's infinite belief..
and make them all..
at the very same time..
santa clause..
of wishes..
and love..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bibhakar Dutta 31 December 2011

Really You have feelings for Christmas......Good one!

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Rekha Mandagere 31 December 2011

Glorious thought for inspiring humanity with a new zeal for life. Fantastic poem :) I must give 10++++ for creating such a lovely picture of Infant Jesus and Mother Mary.

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Alicia Meyers 31 December 2011

Very wonderful, powerful, and beautiful piece. A work of art. I love it!

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Elizabeth Wesley 30 December 2011

Very beautiful Ahmed, you capature the spirit of Christmas with great beauty and devotion. You might like to visit me, I am new and have just posted two poems. Happy new year to you! Elizabeth

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Robert Beck 30 December 2011

Thank you for sharing this poem and your thoughts........

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 27 February 2012

The ending was killing...brilliant. Come to me christ, and bless all human, making em all at the same time santa claus of wishes and love. Boy...this is gud....kudos.

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Walterrean Salley 28 January 2012

A beautiful prayer poem for all mankine. Very touching. Voted 10

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Heyyou Boy 10 January 2012

Heart felt and impressive. Great write Ahmed

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 07 January 2012

You've had alot of great works in your hand, there is creativity in your words. I like this!

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Young Church Poetry 05 January 2012

Come to me love the line. Your poem is full of love just like Christmas day. Love it.......

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