Climax Poem by Deborah Cromer

Climax

Rating: 4.3


To live under rays of golden sun
Where streams of sweet water run
Plants and trees live, to cover the land
Smiles are everywhere and love is grand

The air is fresh and the sky is blue
I took a second look when I first met you
I now feel colors and breathe in sound
I want you to know of the magic I have found

I have a new life that is just perfect for me
I feel so alive, so wonderful and free
Never has it ever felt as good as now
God's giving, as only he knows how

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 10 July 2009

There's a bubble in this one This poem is a great fun This reflects a true DC The one the world wants 2 C...

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Dev Poet 09 November 2009

That was very nice well written

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Piyush Sharma 21 July 2009

Well, this is what heaven should be like. Great imagination. 'You can feel the colors and breathe the sound'. This is really excellent, coz it is an altogether different plane of perception. It happens with people using marijuana, but i am sure by 'the magic you have found' you arent referring to it. I thank you for a wonderful poem coz it is just overflowing with happiness. (unlike a big majority of poems here) .

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 July 2009

profound, thanks for sharing

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rhyme and reson wedded well :)

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Eyan Desir 13 July 2009

Very sweet..... haha...well written

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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