Come To Discover Comments

A pulchritudinous w-rap. Thanks. Between Frost, you and I; truth and beauty are just as same.

Excellent work.....thanks for sharing...

..... discover thyself to be enlightened...

Come and discover a precious poetry! I am touched by the great honesty in this brilliant poem.5 Stars TOP Score.

4. This is a true dissection of life, As you sow, so you reap. You sow love and happiness, you will them in plenty. Very wise words. True poetry. Congratulations. Top score

Part 3…. then finally it flowers, which then matures into ears of rice. Then comes the day of harvesting. A big crowd gathers to watch the harvesting machine working, though it is the same machine as last year, last season. Such happiness we get nowhere.

Part 2. Although I plant paddy in our fields two seasons every year, the enjoyment does not subside, when we till the field, organise the manure and seeds, plant and replant, apply manure, weed the field organise adequate water..

As I am a farmer basically, I do fully endorse your views. We plant a tiny cutting of rose shoot, watch how it sprouts, develops leaves and after many days a but, and then the day comes when the bud blossoms spreading its fragrance, it's gay beauty for all to enjoy.

Mahtab, this poem can't help but INSPIRE and MOTIVATE! Such a grateful experience!

There are so many gifts, like peace, beauty, poetry, the love in our hears, creativity, .. that are freely available but remain undiscovered, unopened presents. Wonderful poem.

I agree with Sandra, an excellent write.

Such a beautifully written and optimistic poem with a perfect message. Excellent write

Love it TFS

come, speak the truth as nature don't imitate to be blind, be creative discover thyself to be enlightened....loved this candid poetic expression! A brilliant poem. Top score!