* Competition Kills [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* Competition Kills [senryu]

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competition kills
all..the inherent beauty
in every thing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 28 May 2009

While sometime competition kills the inherent beauty, it helps to increase the quality of work, if I am correct.

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this is a senryu for the ages.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 28 May 2009

Yeah competition to remain uno in a poetry website kills..................lol.........joking.......A Good Write............

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2009

Sort of nature - the strong survive

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

i agree with u....in every form competition(healthy or unhealthy) kills

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 June 2009

Compete with passion and leave the rest...winning and losing is not main. Nice write.

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

To compete with skill sportively without jealousy is healthy...otherwise it would be a chaos...nice poem

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Ency Bearis 29 May 2009

meaningful write.......

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

competition gives life, to everything thats right.

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Naidz Ladia 28 May 2009

anywhere, there is competion...in work, school, business etc..and etc..this is a part of civilization..naizz

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