* Cat On The Wall [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* Cat On The Wall [senryu]

Rating: 3.4


cat sat on the wall
not knowing which side to fall
dogs on both to pounce

[I thank carl harris and sandra martyres]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 28 May 2009

let the cat call her mate to divert the dogs' mind... :)

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

good one...has a bright image inside...10

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Naidz Ladia 28 May 2009

i still dont know the rule of senryu...regardless of formats, this 3 lined-poem is nice to read..naughty dogs..pity cat..naizz

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Sandra Martyres 28 May 2009

Nice one Samanyan...

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Mamta Agarwal 28 May 2009

nice one- poor cat maMTA

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 June 2009

No idea what to say...the cat story is near to my heart. Well said.

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an excellent meaningful poem..let me start to think where to fall...10++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Marvelous 10

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

cat on the wall, sooner or later it will fall.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 May 2009

How dogs came on both sides of the wall to falsify the proverb 'Cat on the wall' to show any doubting Thomas? It is humorous.

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