Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


* Competition Kills [senryu] - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

competition kills
all..the inherent beauty
in every thing


Comments about * Competition Kills [senryu] by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • (6/1/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    Compete with passion and leave the rest...winning and losing is not main. Nice write. (Report)Reply

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  • Indira Renganathan (5/30/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    To compete with skill sportively without jealousy is healthy...otherwise it would be a chaos...nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • Ency Bearis (5/29/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    meaningful write....... (Report)Reply

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  • Louis Rams (5/28/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    competition gives life, to everything thats right. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/28/2009 8:36:00 PM)

    anywhere, there is competion...in work, school, business etc..and etc..this is a part of civilization..naizz (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/28/2009 7:46:00 PM)

    While sometime competition kills the inherent beauty, it helps to increase the quality of work, if I am correct. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/28/2009 5:53:00 PM)

    this is a senryu for the ages. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/28/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    Yeah competition to remain uno in a poetry website kills..................lol.........joking.......A Good Write............ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/28/2009 1:12:00 PM)

    Sort of nature - the strong survive (Report)Reply

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  • Shekhar Joshi (5/28/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    i agree with u....in every form competition(healthy or unhealthy) kills (Report)Reply

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  • Smiley Hooker (5/28/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    i agree with Sandra and Priyanka. just a healthy competition and it's all right.: -) (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Martyres (5/28/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    In today's world we cannot survive without competition - of the positive kind ofcourse... (Report)Reply

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick (5/28/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    well this a competitive world and we can't rise without a competition. i was just portraying the difference in jealousy and competition.. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 30, 2009


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