* Competition Kills [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* Competition Kills [senryu]

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competition kills
all..the inherent beauty
in every thing

Thursday, May 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 28 May 2009

While sometime competition kills the inherent beauty, it helps to increase the quality of work, if I am correct.

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this is a senryu for the ages.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 28 May 2009

Yeah competition to remain uno in a poetry website kills..................lol.........joking.......A Good Write............

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2009

Sort of nature - the strong survive

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

i agree with u....in every form competition(healthy or unhealthy) kills

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 June 2009

Compete with passion and leave the rest...winning and losing is not main. Nice write.

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

To compete with skill sportively without jealousy is healthy...otherwise it would be a chaos...nice poem

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Ency Bearis 29 May 2009

meaningful write.......

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

competition gives life, to everything thats right.

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Naidz Ladia 28 May 2009

anywhere, there is competion...in work, school, business etc..and etc..this is a part of civilization..naizz

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