Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Concealed - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Waves lick the shoreline
Depositing small treasures
Some are never found

Comments about Concealed by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/17/2012 1:48:00 PM)

    nice thought, though not fond of the flow. Still great discriptions! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/27/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    excellent haiku Tiffany, because it does not try to cram too much into the verse. A good haiku gives the reader an impression of the emotion of the scene depicted. For me this created a strong image of the shore and isolation. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Chen-ou Liu (6/25/2012 9:20:00 AM)

    Tiffany, Haiku is an art of suggesting rather than showing.

    Its emotional power relies mainly on the skillful use of juxtaposed images and the mental room left to the reader's imagination and reflection.

    Your L3 leaves a little to the reader's imagination. Just a thought for you to use or lose.
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  • Abdullah Jamil (6/25/2012 7:55:00 AM)

    Lovely one. Keep on writing more haiku......... (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2012 12:16:00 PM)

    nice Haiku, Tiffanny, I love Haiku writing myself. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    particularly like the first 2 lines (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/23/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    5-7-5 piece is beautiful in its content. (Report) Reply

  • Urshula Davis (6/22/2012 10:10:00 PM)

    I love it! I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (5/31/2012 7:31:00 AM)

    Another one...a beautiful haiku (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 11, 2012

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