Crackle, pop, the wood that fuels the fire snaps
It falls to the bottom of the pit
Where I can again hear the coals sizzle
With my desire
My feet start to move
Then my legs
Oh man there my hand goes
Just wishing you were here
I bite my lip till it bleeds
In silence I scream out in pleasure
As I touch the point of ignition
The fire extends through out my whole body
And echo’s into my soul
I cant help myself
I want so badly
It grows as long as the fire grows
And the fire will grow as long as
My addition needs feeding
nice poem. enjoyed reading it. words are powerful and strong.
wow...lol... a very nice poem with very power start...thanks 10
..as i touch the point of ignition.. oh man i love how ths is written, the visuals of ths poem..really interesting read nana, well written too word
This is really good keep it up! !
wow, Becca...this is a fantastic write...you said it with a tonne of passion, and kept it steamy, not smutty....love it...great job! !
AWSOME POEM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
i love this, such a true feeling
waaa much passion can be seein in your lines.....as other ' s say its not evil.....poetic sizzling desire........sebastine...
Crackle, pop, the wood that fuels the fire snaps It falls to the bottom of the pit Where I can again hear the coals sizzle With my desire A beautiful beginning crackle-pop wood -fuel-fire snaps i like the semblance to sizzling desire great write ++++10 anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I like your poem but suggest you kill the word evil in the title so that it reads 'Fire Inside Me'.