Crescent Moon Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Crescent Moon

Rating: 5.0


A fisherman's boat
Sailing on the black ocean
With a mighty hand.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well penned piece. Simply pretty and wonderful....10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

it is short but deep, here we are confronting very provoking ideas; such as: the big job and duty needs a proper person to do it, including preparation for it, our dear professional poet always has got some thing new and amazing to share with us, many thanks..it deserves 10+and into fav list ***

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

black ocean - > mighty hand.- > success

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Kim Barney 23 August 2020

Nice haiku done by you!

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Dominic Windram 23 August 2020

Excellent haiku Rose Marie.I can imagine this scenario under a Crescent Moon. It's a ten from me!

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

boat of fishermen = Crescent Moon = starting new month = new adventurous life! great thought

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 September 2020

beautiful Haiku about God

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

A beautiful imagery drawn in just three lines! Very well done, dear poetess. When the moon is nascent, that is when it is only a crescent and not yet a full moon, the seas get dark immediately after twilight. The fishermen row their boats with their mighty hands to transport men and materials and also to catch fish. This is a usual sight along the sea sides and river sides, which has been nicely depicted in the poem. The poem gets 10/10 from me.

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Anjandev Roy 29 August 2020

....black ocean......brilliantly written....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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A gleaming metaphor. It's pleasant to travel in the boat across the black sea if there is a mighty hand to row...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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