Crescent Moon Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Crescent Moon

Rating: 5.0


A fisherman's boat
Sailing on the black ocean
With a mighty hand.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 24 August 2020

black ocean - > mighty hand.- > success

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

it is short but deep, here we are confronting very provoking ideas; such as: the big job and duty needs a proper person to do it, including preparation for it, our dear professional poet always has got some thing new and amazing to share with us, many thanks..it deserves 10+and into fav list ***

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well penned piece. Simply pretty and wonderful....10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Shaun Cronick 24 August 2020

Short and sweet and much more than nice and neat. Three great lines to stir one's imagination to make one truly think on what can be achieved and overcome. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing your poetry gem. A full score so thoroughly and richly deserved. Take care and remain blessed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2020

Sweet one. A gem to read again and again. Loved it.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

boat of fishermen = Crescent Moon = starting new month = new adventurous life! great thought

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 September 2020

beautiful Haiku about God

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

A beautiful imagery drawn in just three lines! Very well done, dear poetess. When the moon is nascent, that is when it is only a crescent and not yet a full moon, the seas get dark immediately after twilight. The fishermen row their boats with their mighty hands to transport men and materials and also to catch fish. This is a usual sight along the sea sides and river sides, which has been nicely depicted in the poem. The poem gets 10/10 from me.

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Anjandev Roy 29 August 2020

....black ocean......brilliantly written....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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A gleaming metaphor. It's pleasant to travel in the boat across the black sea if there is a mighty hand to row...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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