Crows- Our Noisy Friends Poem by Valsa George

Crows- Our Noisy Friends

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Every day I wake to the cacophony
Of a murder of crows cawing on tree tops
They take to the skies in one and two,
As the sun emerges from behind the hills
Though dark, they are the emissaries of light!
They are never in the sky for long,
They land down and glide up shrieking
Flying from hedge to fence
Hopping from mound to plane

These noisy folks remind me
Of the haggling fisher women never silent
Cocking their heads to and fro,
Nothing escapes their watchful eyes
They pick up scraps and crumbs from here and there
And tit bits from the garbage piles

With dusk fall, they come back homes
Full of gossip and tales of travel
These ubiquitous birds of all seasons
Are the unpaid scavengers of the Earth!

Crows- Our Noisy Friends
Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 29 April 2016

There are quite a few that live in the large pine trees at the church where I live. They are indeed very loud, but useful and intelligent

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The poet's keen observation of nature is well reflected in the poem.Nice metaphors in the poem make it unique.The poet's gratitude and love for the bird is nicely expressed in the closing lines.It is a poem to read.10 (Crows were seen in large numbers in Manipur during my childhood yet as the climate changed they dissappeared long back)

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Noisy friends - nicely said. They perform their duty well. Natural habits of crows are beautifully described in your poem.

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

These ubiquitous birds of all seasons Are the unpaid scavengers of the Earth! ..............as i was the teen-aged scavenger of leftover food at the end of holiday meals at the home of my aunt and uncle! i was known (affectionately) as the 'garbage can', or something like that! nice one, Valsa, my good friend. bri ;)

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Susan Williams 23 August 2016

Love it! ! ! ! You captured their obnoxiousness while at the same time their whimsical nature- -hopping around looking for shiny things as well as scraps of food. Loved your word choices! ! ! ! - - - ubiquitous birds- - emissaries of light! - - wake to the cacophony! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2016

Unpaid scavengers! ! Nice piece of work.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 August 2016

The noisy crows are the sweepers of the nature, no doubt in it, they are our friends. A nice write.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

Such lovely kind words for the crow if they can read their hearts will glow Thanks Valsa-10

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Reminded me of the famous short Malayalam poem kooriruttinte kidaathiyennaal, sooryaprakashaththinutta thozhi.. (Vyloppilli?) . Great write. Full marks.

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Valsa George 05 May 2016

Now I remember those lines, but not quite sure who wrote them!

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