Cyber Love Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Cyber Love

Rating: 4.8


During discussion with key-board
through internet messenger,
Love sleeps on the bench like a pet
beside the purple-green footpath.

Sharing violet feelings via e-mail,
million megabytes of stamina s
And converts instantly smiling-heart
into jpg format to attach with the mail.

Cyber love navigates on cool wave
as a kite walking slowly
On the bluish velvet sky
above a land of beckoning jade-dreams.


Poem 07
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niken Kusuma Wardani 21 May 2009

Hi, it's great to dive through 'cyber' to 'love', both are full imagination and you suceed to intertwined it as a fact of act which many had experiences. Tks for sharing these interesting line.

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T S 17 May 2009

Cyber love..... Virtual Love....... verus real Love, I know whic one I prefer. Exquisite write 10 plus

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Darren Koh 17 May 2009

nice poem. special bout cyber love.very unique. rated it 10.

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Anjali Sinha 01 May 2009

introspection is needed here do we proceed or do we stop so many friends here dont know whom to choose but then, lets be happy cos God has created us only for love -10 anjali

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Edna Javelosa 25 April 2009

nice write..many a friends i knew met the loves of their lives through the internet and are very much happily married until now..

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Pandian Angelina 05 September 2009

Hi, How nicely you have depicted cyber love, accepting it with a grace and not condemning it like most do for its shallowness. Maybe you depict the shallowness when you say it is just like a pet and kite flying things done for a short time and then forgotten. Your poem, Ashraf, is another painting as beautiful as ever a summers day at the park with a clear sky. Angel.

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Hon’ble Poet, Excellent write up. Relevant for new ages. And a Ten. Incidentally similar poem you’ll find ‘Lip Lock Rendezvous’ kindly put your valuable opinion and vote if worthy of. Regards, dr. sakti 14.08.09.

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Sílvia Oliveira 26 May 2009

Dear Ashraful, Mine are Linda´s and Hema´s words about your 'Cyber Love' - it really deserves a 10! Congrats from Brazil, Sílvia P.S. Thanks for your comments on my hai ku - it´s meaninul to me!

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Linda Ori 23 May 2009

So, that's how it works! I love this poem - filled with beautiful imagery and lovely descriptive detail. Cyberlove can be very rewarding, although not as good as the real thing. Some can speak their true feelings without risking personal involvement. Nicely done! Linda :)

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Malini Kadir 23 May 2009

Love sleeps in the bench like a pet.......you put it very uniquely! High end world well described.... Dreamy quest.....for jaded dreams

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