this reflection so full of hurt
cracking its beginning to crumble
breaking into many damaged pieces
like glass that's been shattered
these sharp shards left laying
into my heart they do sink
so with every agonizing beat
they slice deeper within
a constant, torturous reminder
of how i'm painfully broken again
Wow, a shattering piece...broken mirror/broken heart. It still cuts like a knife...
Great write. I (unfortunately) can so relate to this. Thank you for sharing, We're not alone.
A great simile poem, pain can cause damage emotionally, well versed thought.
Amazing emotion, I've yet to have my heart broken but I think I know what it feels like now...
these sharp shards left laying into my heart they do sink so with every agonizing beat painful and deeply felt nice poetry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You just keep getting better... Such a descriptive powerful poem... Your words came to life and I felt them... Excellent poem...