Thursday, February 6, 2020

Dancing In Hydra Comments

Rating: 5.0

With his deep voice made
of cigarettes and alcohol
He plays a Spanish guitar
As we dance in Hydra
...
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

With his deep voice made of cigarettes and alcohol He plays a Spanish guitar As we dance in Hydra....delightfully expressed! A beautiful poem!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 November 2020

cigarettes and alcohol He plays a Spanish guitar As we dance in Hydra Under an ancient moon then he walked away in Buddhist clouds. tony

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Kim Barney 30 October 2020

You have a great imagination. Well done!

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Terry Dawson 25 October 2020

I like the feeling of your poetry, Leeann, but at the same time I feel a little lost like our two worlds are too far apart for me to know your greater meaning...?

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2020

Dancing! ! Musing along with cigarettes and alcohol. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 April 2020

As we dance in Hydra Under an ancient moon The waltz lasted until the sea glowed In the Mediterranean sun.. great fantasy dear Lee Ann. tony

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Mj Lemon 20 February 2020

I find myself in Barcelona. Magnificent verse, LeeAnn.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2020

we gave him coins and roses Then, he walked away In the Buddhist clouds /// fantastic expression

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Kevin Patrick 12 February 2020

Enchantingly rich, with vivid detail, its almost like a surrealist painting. I love the last lines, it makes it more otherworldly, thank you for sharing LeeAnn.

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Carl Roussell 10 February 2020

I have to agree with all the comments made, this is indeed an excellent poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 February 2020

Such intensely beautiful and vivid imagery! Excellent poem!

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Luz Hanaii 06 February 2020

Beautiful imagery here, I could see the coins and roses.

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Kostas Lagos 06 February 2020

What an image! What a poem!

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Mohammad Younus 06 February 2020

Fabulous. Highly imaginative. Thanx for sharing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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