Death Only Can Ease (C) 8-29-09 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Death Only Can Ease (C) 8-29-09

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Thoughts, suspicions, and the feeling of pain
And angry hope of never leaving it’s side again
Misery, Imagery playing constantly through my head
The only way to ease my mind is for me to be dead
The sudden rush of energy that wants to leave right now
The love I once had makes me not even want to breathe right now
Anxiety, distress over her the master has become a slave
The feelings of constantly looking down a feeling death only can save
Anguish and the thinking of “what if” some things you never will know
Once felt that our love for each other forever would grow
No time to cry and beg and pray and let out “I need you please O please”
It’s been awhile but again I’m startin to feel a pain that Death only can ease

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 23 August 2009

A fine and passionate expression. The 'death' here can be absorption of your ego in your love for your beloved. In true love the individuals merge their identities in Love. All the best. A very pleasant verse on lover's 'anguish' and vulnerability.

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Kortnie Smith 09 April 2010

I didnt know you used to be emo. death is never the answer.

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Kayla Taylor 02 March 2010

very deep...very real...I bet alot of people feel this way when they just want to give up I know I have...very good loved it

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Chatara Conway 06 September 2009

This poem about pain is very deep, and I feel that it really expresses how people really feel at hard times. Really Good! :)

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Louis Rams 04 September 2009

suspicions, and anger can kill even the strongest of love and you have to climb way up above. you may be able to qustion the feelings of love, but not the depth of love. death can not ease the pain, that's just something to which you can pass the blame. good write a ten

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Myrtle Thomas 23 August 2009

Wonderfully written, very forlorn feelings.I know this feeling as most humans do, but real love there is no guessing nor jealousy.It is a partnership of trust.Death comes to suspicions.Love is a comfortable but exciting feeling.But the heart throbs for most in dread. Very good read

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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