Let it be unknown what's anonymous!
Is it necessary to proclaim
the color of feelings?
Who wanted to reach over cellular?
Neither the kiss nor the caress
on the deep days
Pushed buttons thousands times?
Who wanted to receive
signals beyond network?
Who was stupid beyond fool?
Poem 09
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
yah! so true in this complexity of life...desire is reduced to mere commodities, some may are just for sale... the best poem on desire.....thank you my friend and God bless...a 10++++++
emotions are even tampered with modern gadgets of globalization... i envy you are can read the original compositions of tagore!
A poem with deep meaning. Very nice work! Thank you.
in truth it is easier to supress the first desire than satisfy all that follow, well done my friend
Desires are fancy n unstoppable. well thought poem....10 i wrote stroing desire... compare for name sake
i liked how the poem flowed in a complex yet simple way you kinda had like two diff things embodied in one.
simple they can be asked... but these are difficult questions! ! ! nothing to do with their answers...! ! yes a very nice work Dear! 10.. Ali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You expose the complexities of our lives. There are so many ways of reaching out and 'touching' but the satisfaction varies as often as the desire that inspires the gesture.