Desire Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Desire

Rating: 5.0


Let it be unknown what's anonymous!
Is it necessary to proclaim
the color of feelings?

Who wanted to reach over cellular?
Neither the kiss nor the caress
on the deep days
Pushed buttons thousands times?

Who wanted to receive
signals beyond network?
Who was stupid beyond fool?


Poem 09
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

Monday, May 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 09 May 2009

You expose the complexities of our lives. There are so many ways of reaching out and 'touching' but the satisfaction varies as often as the desire that inspires the gesture.

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Antonio Liao 26 April 2009

yah! so true in this complexity of life...desire is reduced to mere commodities, some may are just for sale... the best poem on desire.....thank you my friend and God bless...a 10++++++

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premji premji 24 April 2009

emotions are even tampered with modern gadgets of globalization... i envy you are can read the original compositions of tagore!

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Constantinos Grigoriadis 07 October 2008

A poem with deep meaning. Very nice work! Thank you.

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Shimon Weinroth 26 September 2008

in truth it is easier to supress the first desire than satisfy all that follow, well done my friend

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Alex Lewis 25 June 2009

I enjoy pieces on fate. This is one of my favorites. 10

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Desires are fancy n unstoppable. well thought poem....10 i wrote stroing desire... compare for name sake

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Karla Bardanza 19 May 2009

Great lines! Simple & perfect! Love & Light! Karla

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Flose Boursiquot 18 May 2009

i liked how the poem flowed in a complex yet simple way you kinda had like two diff things embodied in one.

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Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

simple they can be asked... but these are difficult questions! ! ! nothing to do with their answers...! ! yes a very nice work Dear! 10.. Ali

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