Desire Poem by asma bahrainwala

A magnificent roll of designed words that fuel the flames of life-affirming freedom. There's a distinguished feeling of triumph here which runs deep and can bring to mind actual examples in today's complex world of countless social barriers. It's not too hard to embrace and indulge in the strong and righteous visual of it.

You are brilliant! ! !

Confined by a Wall; Restricted by a Boundary; Stagnated by it All..............overflowing in poetry! great! ! .

Please Asma... keep writing such great poems...10

What a striking metaphor! Beautiful succinct expression of everyone's desire to break out of the self and become a part of the whole. This is a really good poem!

Shared ur desire. Appreciable emotion for mankind.

.....fine composition.............10

I'm not sure about the title of this piece. It seems to me that confined or restricted may have been a more appropriate title for this. It really wasn't a very unique message. I don't think you can put a word like desire in a title and expect the reader to be impressed after they read such a writing as this. It was, in my view, average. GW62

A wonderful poem rooted in modern realities. Thanks for shaing. K V Venkataramana

what an imagination; Great