Disintegration And Collapse. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Disintegration And Collapse.

Rating: 5.0

How low
Have we fallen?
How deep
Is the wound?
That no amount
Of lying
Can hide or cover,
The hideous
And bleeding

Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2023

So very true. Lies can come to us in wealth, beauty and strength but its ugly face will always come out. Truth no matter how much it is compromised will always prevail and showers us with happiness.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2023

A powerful and wonderful poem so heartfelt and rightly said.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2023

Wonderful Sandra Just perfect

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Keilani Poetry 22 January 2023

Your words can be applied to much these days, dear poet. You have captured this unfortunate truth, very well in your succinct poem.

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David Wood 22 January 2023

You've summed up British politicians perfectly! !

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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2023

Wo this is wonderful. Truth is bleeding! When great crimes are committed, there's no cover-up. Certainly mankind is exposing itself. Brilliant!

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Lies can not hide Truth. So let us acknowledge it, let us say it aloud even when it is unpleasant. Profound poem Sandra.5*

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Rob Lamberton 24 January 2023

There is power in the blood of truth and hope for a fallen world.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 January 2023

none can hide the pain or happines; it's natural outburst of feelings; nice to read

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Susan Williams 22 January 2023

you nailed the heartbreaking truth with brevity and power---top marks for this extraordinary poem

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