Distort Poem by ramesh rai

Distort

Rating: 5.0


Have i ever made such a smile
the spring manifested her colorful ductile
the flower never blossomed futile
to make her fragrance every one juvenile

Have i ever made such a smile
stars twinkled devitalise
moon gave up moonlit night
sun has frozen during day light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 10 August 2013

You capture the reader with beautiful lines so vividly expressed! Superb write!

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Dave Walker 10 August 2013

Everything is distorted if we look close enough. A great write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

Nice images and distortions. Thank you.

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R.j. Wynn 12 August 2013

It's a beautiful thing.

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Shahzia Batool 12 August 2013

a write based on wit...nice read! ! !

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David Wood 12 August 2013

A delightful poem. If we could only smile more at people the world would be a happier place.

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Poetheart Morgan 10 August 2013

Ah! you are on the top of a mountain, plus 1800 meters hight, looking for the stars and blossomed flowers at your feet. Now i understand! ! ! A big smile in my face! ! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem. Have I ever made such a smile., , lovely write and loved reading it too.

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