saadat tahir

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Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love - Poem by saadat tahir

Us
Thus
We make our dream
So serene
Chiffon fluttering breeze
To life a lease
Drew I close, in awe.
I in your eyes saw.
Brim of love.
Coo of a dove.
Barefoot to you.
Took off my shoe.
You my prayer.
Stood you there.
Temple of my desire.
The steeple the spire.
Quintessence of romance.
Fulfillment of my dance.
You held my hand.
In heaven stand.
Your arms garlands.
Drawing in bands.
My being, I to the fore.
Surrender to the lure.
Burn in my loins the fires.
Seek that the sires.
Bloom therein flowers.
In Venus’ gushing showers.
As I roll to seek the flow.
Unasked twinkle of a glow.
Oh please stop, slow.
I have you though.
Moon long gone, has dimmed.
My curtains now rimmed.
The inevitable dawn.
My dream sawn.
Its now fawn.
Yes Gone.
A groan.
Moan.
You.
I.

(Islamabad)
(May 26,2009)


Comments about Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love by saadat tahir

  • Farah Ilyas (1/28/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm (Report)Reply

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  • Farah Ilyas (1/28/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    Hello,

    Beautifully suggestive and like those dreams, this poem lingers on in your mind for a long time afterwards........
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  • (8/7/2009 1:13:00 AM)

    wowwwwwww...and iam saying why your poems are full of music..slow handssssss...this poem cheers me while enjoying reading it..that beauty of surrendering to the lure of a loving love.... (Report)Reply

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  • (6/22/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    A dream of desire written so well, good flow to this
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (6/9/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    Dream of desire you have woven fabulously...nice rhymes both internal and end rhymes...10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (6/9/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    My dream sawn....really excellent sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/1/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    I love how you took this poem from beginning to end with such a great flow and rhyme. It tells a touching story of romance and love. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    Great rhyme and beautiful imagery. I really admired the way after 'moon long gone has dimmed' it cleverly spans down to the left with gorgeous metaphors of passion and love. 10 Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick (5/29/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    'Barefoot to you.
    Took off my shoe.
    You my prayer.
    Stood you there.
    Temple of my desire.' wonderful write.
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  • (5/26/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    The YOU & I at the end brings it all tpgether. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 9, 2011


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