Dreams Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Whispers of essence.
Floating cloud presence.
Illusive reality sings.
These dreams of things.
My minds daily clutter.
Like melted yellow butter.
Churning vapid wonders.
Hearts for it's plunder.
Filling our endless hopes.
Crying nights, morning soap.
Dream melodies of floating light.
Reality shatters it's mortal flight.

5/5/09 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 04 May 2009

very very very nice...........reality shatters........thank yu for your kind sharing.

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Muhammad Ali 04 May 2009

O dear dreamy poem....... lovely work JOE :) 10.. Ali

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Catrina Heart 04 May 2009

great end rhymes written with fine theme...........lovely!

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Absent Wryta 08 May 2009

Excellent rhyming. Lovely poem

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Wonderful image rich writing Joe...Fi 10+++

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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2009

Joe. if only our beautiful dreams could be reality proofed. Instead, they are too often shattered by reality. Lovely poem. Good write. Thanks. 10.

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The Lost.. 19 September 2009

lovely poem all of us wish the dream to be real 2 live it :)

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009

Much truth is said in a very few simple lines.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

'Dream melodies of floating light. Reality shatters it's mortal flight.' Beautiful poem,10+++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 May 2009

Dreams give hopes, reality shatters.......wonderful. Something like my poem DAY DREAM. This exceptionally good.

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