Rating: 5.0
Whispers of essence.
Floating cloud presence.
Illusive reality sings.
These dreams of things.
My minds daily clutter.
Like melted yellow butter.
Churning vapid wonders.
Hearts for it's plunder.
Filling our endless hopes.
Crying nights, morning soap.
Dream melodies of floating light.
Reality shatters it's mortal flight.

5/5/09 POEWHIT

Monday, May 4, 2009
Walterrean Salley 01 November 2009
Joe. if only our beautiful dreams could be reality proofed. Instead, they are too often shattered by reality. Lovely poem. Good write. Thanks. 10.
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The Lost.. 19 September 2009
lovely poem all of us wish the dream to be real 2 live it :)
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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009
Much truth is said in a very few simple lines.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009
'Dream melodies of floating light. Reality shatters it's mortal flight.' Beautiful poem,10+++
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Dreams give hopes, reality shatters.......wonderful. Something like my poem DAY DREAM. This exceptionally good.
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Fay Slimm 18 May 2009
Floaty dreamy verse Joe and full of lovely metaphor......10 + ++ Fay
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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009
Wonderful image rich writing Joe...Fi 10+++
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Absent Wryta 08 May 2009
Excellent rhyming. Lovely poem
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Catrina Heart 04 May 2009
great end rhymes written with fine theme...........lovely!
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Muhammad Ali 04 May 2009
O dear dreamy poem....... lovely work JOE :) 10.. Ali
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