Drinking And Drugging Is Not The Way To Go

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Drinking and drugging is not the way to go
It leads to nothing but trouble
You'll have a hard time thinking clearly
You'll often get lost in the shuffle
People will avoid you at all costs
They will see you as being suspicious
Others will not know who you really are
Because now you're very dangerous

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 02 December 2015

Get high in the moment, it lasts longer and stays purer

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M Asim Nehal 02 December 2015

Very true, what is the point to drink when you are not in full senses?

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Kim Barney 02 December 2015

Others will not know who you really are and you won't know yourself either. Well said, Ronell.

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Souren Mondal 02 December 2015

One should just drink Life to the fullest and live healthy.. A beautiful write.. Thanks for sharing..

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 December 2015

Very true. One should stay away from these habits.

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Sarah Shahzad 06 December 2019

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Richard Wlodarski 01 September 2018

Such great advice is so desperately needed in this age of opioids! Excellent write, Ronell!

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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2018

Nice advice of a learned poet, loved this poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2018

You'll have a hard time thinking clearly You'll often get lost in the shuffle People will avoid you at all costs. a very great advice you give dear poet............ those who will read your poem will change.... i hope.......let us hope together to change this world to goodness and to God. tony

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A. Madhavan 02 December 2015

Sorry, I have to confess that, though I applaud this poet for the prolific number of poems authored and circulated by our valued Website, I am not in favour of morphing prose into verse by cutting up some sentences into separate lines, disregarding the Comma, and even standard norms of English grammar and usage. I shall read a few more of the author's contributions and perhaps correct my own errors. A.Madhavan

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