Saturday, September 23, 2017

Echoes Of Your Screams Comments

Rating: 4.6

Tears flow from my eyes
and leave their wet trails behind
like footsteps in snow…
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Faiza Khan Jadoon
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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Deep passionate feelings written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Faiza.

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Muzahidul Reza 02 October 2017

has taken refuge beneath my pale skin, fantastically written, thanks for sharing and congrats of being day, s poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2017

Like footsteps in snow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 October 2017

there wouldn't be anything left of me inside my own self and I would be just a hollow body with echoes of your screams reverberating through its walls every now and then. A great write accompanied by an appropriate snap. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10++++

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 02 October 2017

Wonderful poem at the very outset of your poetic career.Congratulations on being the member of the day.Well done Faiza. Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Richard Wlodarski 02 October 2017

Heart-wrenching and eloquently written. Very vivid imagery. Writing that packs a punch. Congratulations on a very well deserved Poem Of The Day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

It is a beautiful poem on pain and memories having touching and effective expression. Let it be quoted some lines.. My soul is a haunted house of memories and this heart is a hellhole filled to the brim with writhing fires and lava of pain and torment where naughty demons play hide and seek… Thanks for sharing and congratulatios for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2017

Loss of love resulting in heartache leaving behind unending pains of memories is so effectively and beautifully described in this poem that it has become a work of art. Still we love as we are born to love and to be decieved in love. A perfect selection as members poem of the day, congrats.

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Sochukwu Ivye 02 October 2017

Such an elegant verse. What we would have missed if not shared with us here. Worth the nomination; worth the while. Kudos, poet.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 02 October 2017

Candidly outspoken screech of a lingering heart, poignantly presented. Wonderful poem, indeed. Congrats for being the member's PoD.X

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Tom Allport 02 October 2017

a harrowing write that if true? my heartfelt best wishes go out you.....................well written

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Nudershada Cabanes 02 October 2017

A poem written from the core of the heart.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 October 2017

Congrats for being chosen....Such a great write, Faiza..... a highest mark of 10++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Faiza. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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