Embracing Paradise Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Embracing Paradise

Rating: 5.0


In yr embrace, I am in paradise
And I can see in yr smile
When there's nothing to smile about
Joy is when you kiss suddenly
Nothing I deserve
For me, I am in heaven right here
Because of you
And when you leave, I will fall
Into the pit of Hell
And I'll never recover
For I refuse to do so

Saturday, December 31, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 31 December 2022

Vividly realistic and yet romantic, Clearly passionate and explicit, A strong and far reachinge

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Sandra Feldman 31 December 2022

A strong and far reaching love. Excellent work.

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David Wood 31 December 2022

Moments of love sometimes flash too quickly before our eyes leaving memories of paradise here on Earth….

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 January 2023

your loving embrace makes me divine!

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Anjandev Roy 01 January 2023

For I refuse to do so...... brilliantly written....thank u...

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Nosheen Irfan 01 January 2023

Through love we experience paradise on earth. Totally second your thoughts. Love is the essence of life and happiness. Bravo!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 December 2022

In total agreement with David.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 December 2022

A beautiful love poem. Enjoyed.

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